Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Questions/Concerns about Draft 1

Some questions about my draft are:
  1. Is there any place that needs to be elaborated more?
  2. Is my conclusion a strong one?
  3. Does it flow?
Some concerns I have are:
  • the length
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1 comment:

  1. AHALL409September 20, 2011 at 10:30 AM

    1. I fel that if you would go into depth on Kahn's and Dowery's background it woud give you a stronger story.
    2. I feel that your conlusion is sttrong and concludes your essay very well.
    3. The overall flow of your story is great.

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